Changes I will make to my trailer.

Since I have gathered the feedback from both the film pitch feedback video and the questionnaire, I can now start to make slight changes based on the feedback from my candidates and what they expect to see. On a positive note, the majority of the feedback is positive however there are some changes that they will expect to see and I will try and incorporate those into my film trailer.

Additional Characters

One of the main expectations that my candidates want to see in the film are additional characters, rather than just seeing the two protagonists for the whole trailer. I have decided that I will cast additional actors to play the role of Carrie's mother, possibly the brother and also the ex-boyfriend.

Tagline

All of my candidates have commented on the tagline with different opinions, however the majority of them have said that the tagline is too long so I will change it to a shorter one. I still want the tagline to be relatable to the characters so I will think of the most appropriate tagline to use. Another candidate said that the tagline is quite comical which means I may need to think of something that would suit the atmosphere of the film.


Overall, I will definitely make these minor changes because I want my target audience to feel captivated in my film which is why I asked for feedback. I will upload any further improvements I have made in future posts.